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Stegalloway123  
#1 Posted : 23 October 2019 00:33:40(UTC)
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Stegalloway123

I am safety representative for employees in my place of work .

Recently reviewed the newly compiled RA.

I have a few issues with them ( control measures actually not in place that say they are and other incorrect information)

The above is the most important and the main focus of my findings however have also noticed 2 other issues I would like help with .

(1) Spelling Mistakes. The document has 20 + spelling mistakes in. Some bigger than others. Am I being pedantic here? Aslong as the document is comprehensible I suppose that's all that matters but I've seen people not get a position here due to a spelling mistake on an application so I'd expect the same scrunity on a legal document. Am I being fair and how should I approach this issue?

(2) In the consequence / risk section it's seems to mention more business consequences than actually physical risk or harm to employees. For example, Slips trips and falls it talks about 3 Physical harms it could cause but then goes on to mention:

Loss of business
Cost to employer
Low staff rentention
Legal action
Civil action

Has anyone see this before ? If nebosh has taught me anything it's that the above are reasons why H+S should be managed , just don't know if this is needed on a risk assessment.

Any advice appreciated

Edited by user 23 October 2019 00:34:48(UTC)  | Reason: Mistake

O'Donnell54548  
#2 Posted : 23 October 2019 06:27:44(UTC)
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O'Donnell54548

Two points:

1. If you are a NEBOSH trained representative you should know the answers to your questions

2. Take a look at your own grammar and spelling.  

AndrewFM94  
#3 Posted : 23 October 2019 06:52:31(UTC)
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AndrewFM94

Originally Posted by: O'Donnell54548 Go to Quoted Post

Two points:

1. If you are a NEBOSH trained representative you should know the answers to your questions

2. Take a look at your own grammar and spelling.  


I don't think that this is a necessary comment. 

In answer to your question(s);

Spelling mistakes may seem like minor issues on their own, but over 20 can make a RAMS look unprofessional. As you stated - it is a legal document and could well be scrutinised, you could ask the author to 'tidy up' the document, perhaps say that there are a few SPG errors. I suggest you word it nicely as some people can be quite precious about their RAMS.

I believe that the business consequences should be listed in one section but the large majority of the Risk Assessment should focus on the physical consequences. I assume you insist the employees at your work have to read and sign the RAMS? It isn't very reassuring for a company to focus more on the business consequences rather than the personal consequences. 

I hope this helps, have a good day. 

Sweep  
#4 Posted : 23 October 2019 08:26:20(UTC)
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Sweep

I’m wondering if the author is trying to cover off a legal register and/or business continuity plan/assessment as well.  This may also be due to the nature of the review group the author submitted the document to originally.  Clearly the document will not be suitable for any of those purposes. 

If so, those type of consequences aren’t going to be relevant to a large group of people at the site or facility.   

jwk  
#5 Posted : 23 October 2019 08:37:04(UTC)
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jwk

Agree with Sweep, business risks belong on the risk register, not on the workplace RA. It's good that they're being considered, as these are the things that drive Directors to take H&S seriously, but they should be recorded separately as they have a different purpose,

John

RayRapp  
#6 Posted : 23 October 2019 08:38:55(UTC)
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RayRapp

If these RAs are a final version as opposed to a draft I would not expect so many spelling/grammatical errors. It does smack of a lack of attention to detail, which for an important document is a concern - worth a subtle mention. 

Workplace RAs don't normally include business contunuity risks. There may be a legitimate reason for this...again, ask the question.

If you have been asked to review these RAs then you are quite within your rights to ask any question and to make any comments as you deem necessary. But before you go too gun-ho just make sure your comments are well drafted and polite.   

usakutiya  
#7 Posted : 23 October 2019 08:49:51(UTC)
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usakutiya

Strongly agreed.
Thanks alot.
Roundtuit  
#8 Posted : 23 October 2019 09:07:38(UTC)
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Roundtuit

Except many documents are written on computers whose in-built spelling and grammar checkers are defaulted to American English meaning that mistakes (color etc.) do not necessarily get flagged by the system

Roundtuit  
#9 Posted : 23 October 2019 09:07:38(UTC)
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Roundtuit

Except many documents are written on computers whose in-built spelling and grammar checkers are defaulted to American English meaning that mistakes (color etc.) do not necessarily get flagged by the system

ttxela  
#10 Posted : 23 October 2019 09:12:00(UTC)
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ttxela

If you are reviewing them then address any errors/concerns you have, otherwise what's the purpose of the review?

In the event a spelling mistake does slip through unless it substantially changes the meaning and causes real misunderstanding (for instance writing does instead of doesn't) then in my experience it's unlikely to affect the course of any legal process you may get involved in.

achrn  
#11 Posted : 23 October 2019 09:16:42(UTC)
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achrn

Originally Posted by: jwk Go to Quoted Post

Agree with Sweep, business risks belong on the risk register, not on the workplace RA. It's good that they're being considered, as these are the things that drive Directors to take H&S seriously, but they should be recorded separately as they have a different purpose,

John


I'm not aware of any statute requiremnent that the written record of a risk assesment needs to be a document exclusively relating to the H&S of individuals.

What is wrong with a document that covers both health and safety risks and business risks?  If both can be covered adequately in a single document, why not do it that way?  Why (with reference to the previous posting) is it "clearly" the case that a single document can't cover both purposes?

Though it isn't normally done that way, I don't see a problem with a RA recording business risk outcomes in addition to harm to individuals.

A Kurdziel  
#12 Posted : 23 October 2019 09:37:43(UTC)
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A Kurdziel

Achrn you are right in theory but my concern would be if that the document might be “taken over” by the corporate risks and the direct risk to people downgraded. If that was the case the document would no longer demonstrate a “suitable and sufficient” risk assessment.  

jwk  
#13 Posted : 23 October 2019 12:00:38(UTC)
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jwk

Originally Posted by: achrn Go to Quoted Post
Originally Posted by: jwk Go to Quoted Post

Agree with Sweep, business risks belong on the risk register, not on the workplace RA. It's good that they're being considered, as these are the things that drive Directors to take H&S seriously, but they should be recorded separately as they have a different purpose,

John


I'm not aware of any statute requiremnent that the written record of a risk assesment needs to be a document exclusively relating to the H&S of individuals.

What is wrong with a document that covers both health and safety risks and business risks?  If both can be covered adequately in a single document, why not do it that way?  Why (with reference to the previous posting) is it "clearly" the case that a single document can't cover both purposes?

Though it isn't normally done that way, I don't see a problem with a RA recording business risk outcomes in addition to harm to individuals.

I agree, it's not statute, but business risks and operational workplace risks are dealt with in different places, so keeping them apart just adds to clarity, that's all. Npt syaing its 'wrong', just I don't see its helpful,

John

PS: now that's what I call spelling mistakes!!!!

Edited by user 23 October 2019 12:01:44(UTC)  | Reason: fingers and irony

watcher  
#14 Posted : 23 October 2019 12:06:32(UTC)
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watcher

Originally Posted by: usakutiya Go to Quoted Post
Strongly agreed.
Thanks alot.

Monicaaa

You're back

Stegalloway123  
#15 Posted : 23 October 2019 16:32:57(UTC)
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Stegalloway123

Originally Posted by: O' Go to Quoted Post
<p>Two points:
</p><p>1. If you are a NEBOSH trained representative you should know the answers to your questions
</p><p>2. Take a look at your own grammar and spelling. &nbsp;
</p>


Didn't find this comment too helpful tbh.

(1) I didn't realise taking Nebosh nat cert was a prerequisite too knowing everything and if it was I'm sure this forum would be pretty redundant.

(2) This isn't a legal document. Please take my spelling with a pinch of salt especially considering I have a new phone that doesn't quite suit my fat thumbs.

Apart from that , Thanks for the great supportive advice everyone.
achrn  
#16 Posted : 23 October 2019 18:23:13(UTC)
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achrn

Originally Posted by: jwk Go to Quoted Post
Originally Posted by: achrn Go to Quoted Post
Originally Posted by: jwk Go to Quoted Post

Agree with Sweep, business risks belong on the risk register, not on the workplace RA. It's good that they're being considered, as these are the things that drive Directors to take H&S seriously, but they should be recorded separately as they have a different purpose,

I'm not aware of any statute requiremnent that the written record of a risk assesment needs to be a document exclusively relating to the H&S of individuals.

What is wrong with a document that covers both health and safety risks and business risks?  If both can be covered adequately in a single document, why not do it that way?  Why (with reference to the previous posting) is it "clearly" the case that a single document can't cover both purposes?

Though it isn't normally done that way, I don't see a problem with a RA recording business risk outcomes in addition to harm to individuals.

I agree, it's not statute, but business risks and operational workplace risks are dealt with in different places, so keeping them apart just adds to clarity, that's all. Npt syaing its 'wrong', just I don't see its helpful,


I think that assumes lots of stuff.  If this workplace has a management team comprising one workshop manager reposnsible for the workshop and one MD responsible for all director tasks, then these risks are absolutely not dealt with in different places - they are likely dealt with by exactly the same people, and recording the business risks arising from teh workshop operations alongside the health and safety risks arising from teh workshop operations would seem perfectly fine to me.

Even a larger organisation might have a management structure where the same management team is responsible for manging business risk and safety risk - if you target a number of different specialist markets, for example, you may have management responsibility split by operating sector rather than by business function - and then business and H&S risks could be sitting together with a sector management team, rather than a functional management team doing H&S for all sectors while a different one does business risk for all sectors.  My business operates in a hybrid between the two - some business risks are addressed across the business, but some are managed by sector (and some by country).  As it happens, we don't put both business risk and H&S risk in one document, but I think we could without breaching our statute duties, which is why I questioned the apparent certainty that it's clearly inappropriate to do so.

Sweep  
#17 Posted : 24 October 2019 08:41:11(UTC)
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Sweep

Granted ‘clearly inappropriate’ was written with a degree of assumption. 

Subjectively, this approach would not be suitable for the complex infrastructure that I work in.  However a reduction in bureaucracy may have certain benefits …………………

MrBrightside  
#18 Posted : 24 October 2019 09:38:33(UTC)
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MrBrightside

This may come off as a little blunt but why are you asking us? The key to a good employee rep is communication. Go back to the person(s) who wrote it and ask them?

Your role is to not pick up on spelling mistakes, it's to help improve the safety culture or the company, helping to keep people safe. If you send off an email picking up on what's wrong with the assessment you will just put a wedge between you and the Management. This might not be your intention, but trust me it will come off that way.

Go back to who wrote the document, get them to go through it with you and ask to be involved in any others or reviews.

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O'Donnell54548 on 25/10/2019(UTC)
O'Donnell54548  
#19 Posted : 25 October 2019 06:55:47(UTC)
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O'Donnell54548

Originally Posted by: Stegalloway123 Go to Quoted Post
Originally Posted by: O'Donnell54548 Go to Quoted Post

Two points:

1. If you are a NEBOSH trained representative you should know the answers to your questions

2. Take a look at your own grammar and spelling.  



Didn't find this comment too helpful tbh.

(1) I didn't realise taking Nebosh nat cert was a prerequisite too knowing everything and if it was I'm sure this forum would be pretty redundant.

(2) This isn't a legal document. Please take my spelling with a pinch of salt especially considering I have a new phone that doesn't quite suit my fat thumbs.

Apart from that , Thanks for the great supportive advice everyone.


No one expects anyone to know every thing, but I would have thought that a NEBOSH trained safety rep would understand the basics, and it does not get any more basic than risk assessments. Sorry if I came across as unhelpful but it really is shovking some of the questions which are asked on these forums.

There is constant complaints about the low esteem afforded our profession, but based on the type of questions asked here it is no surprise we are not afforde the same respect that other 'experts' demand.

O'Donnell54548  
#20 Posted : 25 October 2019 06:59:32(UTC)
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O'Donnell54548

Spelling mistakes are deliberate to see who delights in pointing these out :)

Stegalloway123  
#21 Posted : 21 November 2019 17:16:31(UTC)
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Stegalloway123

Originally Posted by: O' Go to Quoted Post
Originally Posted by: Stegalloway123 Go to Quoted Post
Originally Posted by: O'Donnell54548 <img title="Go to Quoted Post" alt="Go to Quoted Post" src="/Themes/iosh2/icon_latest_reply.gif">Two points:
1. If you are a NEBOSH trained representative you should know the answers to your questions
2. Take a look at your own grammar and spelling.


Didn't find this comment too helpful tbh.

(1) I didn't realise taking Nebosh nat cert was a prerequisite too knowing everything and if it was I'm sure this forum would be pretty redundant.

(2) This isn't a legal document. Please take my spelling with a pinch of salt especially considering I have a new phone that doesn't quite suit my fat thumbs.

Apart from that , Thanks for the great supportive advice everyone.


No one expects anyone to know every thing, but I would have thought that a NEBOSH trained safety rep would understand the basics, and it does not get any more basic than risk assessments.Sorry if I came across as unhelpful but it really is shovking some of the questions which are asked on these forums.There is constant complaints about the low esteem afforded our profession, but based on the type of questions asked here it is no surprise we are not afforde the same respect that other 'experts' demand.




I am NEBOSH trained however I don't believe the one Nebosh course I have attained supercedes EXPERIENCE. I don't have much experience. I am new to this game hensce why I am in this forum seeking advice . I have only felt mocked by your replies. What part of my question has a basic answer ? I'm struggling to see it. There is a myriad of issues with the risk assessments and I know how to approach most of them, I just weren't sure on the spelling mistakes issue and wether I should raise it or just ignore it.
RayRapp  
#22 Posted : 21 November 2019 19:07:08(UTC)
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RayRapp

The problem with forums is you take your chances with responses. You tend to get good, bad and indifferent comments, but don't be too disheartened as we all try to help - just some do it differently than others.

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Sweep  
#23 Posted : 22 November 2019 08:38:14(UTC)
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Sweep

I browse the forums once or twice a day. 

There are posts/questions that are useful and very occasionally there are posts on subject matter that is relevant to an issue that I am dealing with at work. 

Unfortunately there are replies that appear as unhelpful and in certain cases a little more than unhelpful.  This is, to some extent because the context of the question or response is lost in the short soundbite. 

I try to treat this with a pinch of salt and would advise the same.  (not always easy I know) 

The PM function is a little more friendly than the forums and you always have that option for a more detailed discussion.  If you would like to PM you are very welcome.    

McCrory16882  
#24 Posted : 22 November 2019 10:22:28(UTC)
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McCrory16882

45 years in construction, over 20 years H&S Management in many diciplines, now I remember why I do not visit often, too many di*ks, stellagalloway spot on BYE

hilary  
#25 Posted : 22 November 2019 10:42:07(UTC)
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hilary

Take some of the negative answers with a pinch of salt.  I've been in the business 30 years and there are two things I have learnt in that time:

No one person has all the answers

There are no stupid questions

If you have an issue with the risk assessments and you don't know how to approach the person who wrote them, perhaps you can approach them as a "mentor".  You know they're not 100% otherwise you would not have brought it up, so go to the author and ask why this, that or the other is on the risk assessment and why A, B and C are not because you wish to expand your knowledge.  This will make the author feel very important but will probably also nudge him/her to revisit their work and consider your comments.

Hope this approach helps.

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